Ramayana and Ramcharitmanas are
two different versions of the story of Rama written in the Sanskrit and Awadhi
languages respectively. There are some differences between them when it comes
to the style of poetry used, the manner of composition, religious importance
and the like.
Ramayana is written by sage
Valmiki. It is regarded as Adi Kavya or the first book of ornate poetry.
Ramcharitamanas is based on the original work of Valmiki. It is written by the
great Awadhi poet, Goswami Tulsi Das. He lived in the 15th century AD.
Valmiki Ramayana is indeed the
original version of the story of Rama based on which several other versions in
different Indian languages like Tamil, Telugu, Kannada and Malayalam were
written. Valmiki wrote the Ramayana in 7 Kandams or chapters called as
Balakandam, Ayodhyakandam, Aranyakandam, Kishkindakandam, Sundarakandam,
Yuddhakandam and Uttarakandam.
Tulsidas also wrote the work in
seven Kandas, and they are called as Bala Kand, Ayodhya Kand, Aranya Kand,
Kishkindakand, Sundar Kand, Lanka Kand and Uttar Kand. This is one of the major
differences between the Valmiki Ramayana and the Ramacharitmanas. Tulsidas did
not write the sixth chapter under the title Yuddh Kand but instead he titled it
as Lanka Kand.
Other differences
Lakshman Rekha
Valmiki Ramayana does not mention anything
about Lakshman Rekha (the line drawn by rAmA's brother lakshmaNa, advising
SItA, not to cross that line, till he returned to the hermitage.
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VAlmIki rAmAyaN, book 3,
(AraNya kANDa or book of forests) , sarga 29 - chapter 49, deals with abduction
of SIta by rAvaNa at panchavaTi.
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The chapter has 40 verses. The
chapter starts rAvaNa's self-praise. Ends with jaTAyu seeing the abduction of
SItA by rAvaNa.
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Chapter 45 describes the scene
of lakshmana, folding his palms before Sita, and moving away, as he was unable
to bear her harsh criticism for not going to rescue his brother.
3.45.39
taam aarta ruupaam vimanaa rudantiim
saumitriH aalokya vishaala netraam
aashvaasayaamaasa na caiva bhartuH
tam bhraataram ki.mcit uvaaca siitaa. 3.45.40.
tataH tu siitaam abhivaadya lakSmaNaH
kRita anjaliH kimcid abhipraNamya
avekSamaaNo bahushaH sa maithiliim
jagaama raamasya samiipam aatmavaan .
taam aarta ruupaam vimanaa rudantiim
saumitriH aalokya vishaala netraam
aashvaasayaamaasa na caiva bhartuH
tam bhraataram ki.mcit uvaaca siitaa. 3.45.40.
tataH tu siitaam abhivaadya lakSmaNaH
kRita anjaliH kimcid abhipraNamya
avekSamaaNo bahushaH sa maithiliim
jagaama raamasya samiipam aatmavaan .
These verses show
that lakshmaNa just moved away from SItA looking at her again and again with
folded hands. There was no lakshmaNa rEkha (line drawn by lakshmaNa, limiting
the movement of SItA).
The story of lakshmaNa rEkhA started in
Ramcharit Manas by Tulsidas.
Rama
Ramayana describes rama as a nara human
being ‘Purushottam” and rama is pictured as an incarnation of god vishnu in
ramacharitamanas.
Hanuman
Hanuman is a person in ramayana and is a monkey in tulsidas book.
Vanaras reffered to by Valmiki were a tribe who dwelled within dense forests. During the time of Ramayana, the central part of Indian peninsula was covered by a dense forest by the name Dandaka Forest. Some of the Vanaras lived in this dense forest. Kishkindha was their stronghold, that had sway among the whole of the Vanara tribes spread all over the Indian Subcontinent. It was situated in this forest, located now near the Tungabhadra river in Karnataka state of India. Some literature describes them as monkeys, some as apes. There were many other tribes in Ancient India who are considered to have super-natural powers. These tribes include Gandharvas, Yakshas, Kinnaras, Kimpurushas, Rakshasas, Nagas, Suparnas, Vanaras, Vidyadharas, Valikilyas, Pisachas, Devas (within them Vasus, Rudras, Maruts, Adityas) and Asuras (within them Danavas, Daityas, Kalakeyas and Nivatakavachas.)
Hanuman a Vanara was literally called a monkey in Ramcharit manas.
Sita
When it comes to the characterizations of
the characters, I would tend to believe Valmiki Ramayan a bit more because it
is sometimes evident in Ramcharitmanas that Tulsidasji was influenced by the
society of the 16th century when he was writing the epic. The role of women in
the 16th century was different from the role of women we see in our puranas.
The Sita of Valmiki Ramayan is outspoken, sometimes a bit aggressive, and is
shown equal to Lord Ram whereas in Ramcharitmanas, she is far more submissive,
quiet, and softspoken. In both stories Sita was a pious pativrata woman but
Valmiki definitely portrays her as a stronger woman than Tulsidas does, which I
prefer because Tulsidas's Sita is influenced by the portrayal of women during
his times.
Dashratha
Ramcharit manas says Dashratha had 3 wives
by Ramayana says he had over 350 wives.
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Valmiki Ramayana, Ayodhya
Kanda, Chapter 34, Verses 10 to 13:
'Dasharatha summons Sumantra to fetch all his wives when Rama was ready to to go to forest. Sumantra, after entering the gynaecium, spoke these words to those women as follows: "Oh, the venerable ladies! The king is calling you. Go there without delay. All those women, asked thus by Sumantra as per the king's orders, went to his palace, after knowing the instructions of their husband.'
'Dasharatha summons Sumantra to fetch all his wives when Rama was ready to to go to forest. Sumantra, after entering the gynaecium, spoke these words to those women as follows: "Oh, the venerable ladies! The king is calling you. Go there without delay. All those women, asked thus by Sumantra as per the king's orders, went to his palace, after knowing the instructions of their husband.'
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Valmiki Ramayana, Ayodhya
Kanda, Chapter 34, Verse 10
Dasaratha said to Sumantra,
"Oh, Sumantra! being all my wives, who are here. Surrounded by all of them, I want to see the virtuous Rama."
('who are here' means available at the capital city then)
Dasaratha said to Sumantra,
"Oh, Sumantra! being all my wives, who are here. Surrounded by all of them, I want to see the virtuous Rama."
('who are here' means available at the capital city then)
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Valmiki Ramayana, Ayodhya
Kanda, Chapter 34, Verse 13:
अर्ध सप्त शताः ताः तु प्रमदाः ताम्र लोचनाः |
कौसल्याम् परिवार्य अथ शनैः जग्मुर् धृत व्रताः || २-३४-१३
“ardha sapta shataah taah tu pramadaah taamra locanaah |
kausalyaam parivaarya atha shanaih jagmur dhrita vrataah ||” 2-34-13
atha= thereafter; taah= those; ardha sapta shataah= THREE
HUNDRED AND FIFTY pramadaah= women; dhritavrataah= steadfast in their vow (of devotion to their husband); taamra lochanaah= having red eyes; parivaarya= encircling; kausalyaam= Kausaly; jagmuh= went; shanaih= slowly.
'Encircling Kausalya, three hundred fifty women, steadfast in their vow (of devotion to their husband), with their eyes reddened, went there slowly.'
अर्ध सप्त शताः ताः तु प्रमदाः ताम्र लोचनाः |
कौसल्याम् परिवार्य अथ शनैः जग्मुर् धृत व्रताः || २-३४-१३
“ardha sapta shataah taah tu pramadaah taamra locanaah |
kausalyaam parivaarya atha shanaih jagmur dhrita vrataah ||” 2-34-13
atha= thereafter; taah= those; ardha sapta shataah= THREE
HUNDRED AND FIFTY pramadaah= women; dhritavrataah= steadfast in their vow (of devotion to their husband); taamra lochanaah= having red eyes; parivaarya= encircling; kausalyaam= Kausaly; jagmuh= went; shanaih= slowly.
'Encircling Kausalya, three hundred fifty women, steadfast in their vow (of devotion to their husband), with their eyes reddened, went there slowly.'
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Valmiki Ramayana, Book II :
Ayodhya Kanda, Chapter (Sarga) 39, Verse 34 & 35:
Rama said to Queen Kausalya, His mother,
Rama said to Queen Kausalya, His mother,
"Oh, mother! You do
not grieve. You look after my father. The end of exile will come rather
soon."
"Fourteen years will elapse, while you are asleep. you as such, will see me, duly arrived here in my entire being, surrounded by my well-wishers."
"Fourteen years will elapse, while you are asleep. you as such, will see me, duly arrived here in my entire being, surrounded by my well-wishers."
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Valmiki Ramayana, Book II :
Ayodhya Kanda, Chapter (Sarga) 39, Verse 36:
एतावद् अभिनीत अर्थम् उक्त्वा स जननीम् वचः |
त्रयः शत शत अर्धा हि ददर्श अवेक्ष्य मातरः || २-३९-३६
etaavad abhiniita artham uktvaa sa jananiim vacah |
trayah shata shata ardhaa hi dadarsha avekshya maatarah || 2-39-36
uktvaa = uttering; vachah = words; etaavat = of such quality; abhiniitaartham = end appropriate meaning; aavekshhya = refelected again; dadarsha = (and) gazed at; trayah shata shataardhaah = his three hundred fifty; maatarah cha = mothers also.
एतावद् अभिनीत अर्थम् उक्त्वा स जननीम् वचः |
त्रयः शत शत अर्धा हि ददर्श अवेक्ष्य मातरः || २-३९-३६
etaavad abhiniita artham uktvaa sa jananiim vacah |
trayah shata shata ardhaa hi dadarsha avekshya maatarah || 2-39-36
uktvaa = uttering; vachah = words; etaavat = of such quality; abhiniitaartham = end appropriate meaning; aavekshhya = refelected again; dadarsha = (and) gazed at; trayah shata shataardhaah = his three hundred fifty; maatarah cha = mothers also.
Uttering the aforesaid
words of such quality and appropriate meaning to his mother, Rama thought once
again and gazed at his three hundred and fifty step-mothers.
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Valmiki Ramayana, Book II :
Ayodhya Kanda, Chapter (Sarga) 39, Verses 37 to 40:
Rama joined his palms and saluted those step mothers also, who were too distressed in the same way and spoke these words which were in consonance with the spirit of righteousness.
"Please excuse me, if I have done any mistake either becuase of our living together or due to ignorance on my part. I now take leave of you all."
All those women, whose mind was overpowered with grief, heard the aforesaid cool submission of Rama, which was in consonance with righteousness.
While Rama was speaking thus, an outery, resembling the wail of female cranes arose from those wives of Dasaratha.
Rama joined his palms and saluted those step mothers also, who were too distressed in the same way and spoke these words which were in consonance with the spirit of righteousness.
"Please excuse me, if I have done any mistake either becuase of our living together or due to ignorance on my part. I now take leave of you all."
All those women, whose mind was overpowered with grief, heard the aforesaid cool submission of Rama, which was in consonance with righteousness.
While Rama was speaking thus, an outery, resembling the wail of female cranes arose from those wives of Dasaratha.
Great analysis. Please do continue writing about it.
ReplyDeleteWikipedia says that in Valmiki Ramayan Ram came back to Ayodhya after the swayamwar and stayed in the palace with Dashratha and the rest for twelve years. After this Dashratha decided to crown Ram King and Kaekai started the enter fiasco and Ram was exiled AFTER 12 YEARS OF MARRIAGE WITH SITA. Is this correct?
ReplyDeleteI don't think so. Otherwise he would have children
DeleteI don't think so. Otherwise he would have children
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ReplyDeleteI will recommend u to go and look further and study well about valmiki ramayan because in valmiki ramayan under balkand it is clearly mentioned that lord vishnu console all gods that he will. Take incarnation on earth as a human , this tells that lord ram is god. Not a simple man this all is mentioned in balkand 15th sarg of valmiki ramayan
ReplyDeleteI want to know that who wrote 'luv Kush kand 'which is written in Shri Ramcharitmanas if Tulsidas has written only UpTo Uttarkand
ReplyDeleteI implore you to please speak truthfully. There are those who will read this and actually believe what you wrote, and since you have wrongfully presented opinions not based on fact, it will fool some readers.
ReplyDeleteI will only list just a few key points that you have said which are contradictory to the truth:
1. You have stated that Tulsidas has mentioned the lakshman rekha. But in reality, Tulsidas has never mentioned the Lakshman Rekha.
2. You have said that Raam is described as a man in valmiki ramayan. That is half true, because Raam is also described to be “Vishnu” in many cases. Thus Raam is God that has come down as a man.
भवान्नारायणो देवः श्रीमांश्चक्रायुधः प्रभुः || ६-११७-१३
एकशृङ्गो वराहस्त्वं भूतभव्यसपत्नजित् |
13. bhavaan = you; prabhuH naaraayaNaH = are the Lord Narayaa himself; shriimaan devaH = the glorious god; chakraayudhaH = who wields the discus; tvam = you; varaahaH = are the divine Boar; eka shR^iN^gaH = with a single tusk; bhuuta bhavya sapatnajit = the conqueror of your past and future enemies.
"You are the Lord Narayana himself the glorious god, who wields the discus. You are the Divine Boar with a single tusk, the conqueror of your past and future enemies."
3. You say Hanuman Was not a monkey in the Valmiki Ramayan. Then how would you explain Hanuman tail?
कपीनाम् किल लान्गूलम् इष्टम् भवति भूषणम् |
तत् अस्य दीप्यताम् शीघ्रम् तेन दग्धेन गच्छतु || ५-५३-३
3. kila = It is so said that; kapiinaam = to monkeys; bhavati = it is possible; laaN^guulam = that a tail; iSTam = is a beloved; bhuuSaNam = ornament; tat laaN^guulam = let that tail; asya = of Hanuma; diipyataam = be burnt; shiighram = immediately; gachchhatu = let him go; dagdhena tena = with a burnt tail.
"It is said that a tail is possibly a beloved ornament for the monkeys. Let his tail be burn immediately. Let him go with a burnt tail."
4. You’ve mentioned how women, specifically Sita are portrayed as submissive in the Ramcharitnamansa. Perhaps you have not read of her courage and might when she bravely spoke against Ravan, within the Ramcharitamansa? Have you forgotten the strength of Sati as she spoke openly and harshly to her father for his outright disrespect to Shiva?
I respect that you are more than allowed to state your opinions. But to openly state an opinion as a fact, is not only sheer ignorance, but a disservice to those seeking the truth.
Tulsidas did not write in conformity to his time. Quit the contrary, his book uplifts the status of women, from a place of subjugation to that which is equal to men. It is therefore no wonder even some of the priests of his time violently opposed him. The vision of Tulsidas was the same as Valmiki, the upliftemnt of all of humanity. Tulsidas simply continued where Valmiki left off.
Arjuna's observations are correct.
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